Week #493 - Hope is Absurd
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Wordcount:
Loss


This story was critiqued by:
Captain_Indigo (crit)
Chairchucker (crit)
Chernobyl Princess (crit)
flerp (crit)
Nae (crit)
Noah (crit)
Sitting Here (crit)
Staggy (crit)
SurreptitiousMuffin (crit)
Thranguy (crit)

The kettle had chilly feet and wide lakes. It didn't look dangerous. Not even its backward trees warned me of my fate. I should have sensed the danger in its mouths.

How Andy became a man
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