Week #428 - Objects may be smaller than they appear
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This story was critiqued by:
sebmojo (crit)
Uranium Phoenix (crit)
Yoruichi (crit)

Hellrule: Your small thing is revolving incredibly fast but this fact cannot be perceived by anyone in your story

Zoetrope
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